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Duke Ravage
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Posted on Monday, May 03, 2004 at 22:56 (GMT -5)

OOC: found this while poking about my hard drive. I think I wrote it back in the fall when i was feeling pretty angry at life in general (kinda like now only worse). Feel free to post your own poetry if you're into that stuff or have any of your own.

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Lost Again
by Adam Smith

Time burns down it's wick
As I sit here in the dark
Bright light glows before me
Better light shines outside

Wander through the corridors
Lost in a place I know well
See an angel, want to find her
Turn away and shun the light

Find my friends, always there
Even though they have been gone
Or was that me? Does it matter?
They're here now, we do nothing.

Exploring still, in the same place
See more angels, feel the need
To reach out and let them guide me
Turn away and shun the light

Lost again, another land
Try to be another man
Find new friends, stay me
Leave again, they are gone

Home again, feels strange
Where am I? Lost again
Found an angel, held her tight
Let her go, shunned the light

Here I stand, hiding now
Afraid of that which drags me on
Should feel the king, at the end
And I'm smaller yet than I've ever been

Angels surround me, I need their light
I hide myself, watch from shadows
Angels guiding other people
I burn inside with sadness

I'm lost again, like never before
Lost though I was never found
Times wick is low, I'm lost again
Please someone find me, I'm lost again


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Celavi
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7015 days, 19 hours, 7 minutes and 9 seconds ago.
Posted on Friday, May 21, 2004 at 14:33 (GMT -5)

Goodbye
by me, obviously

Crept upon by a vigilant sense
Lose control of all my feelings
Kept within insecure emotions
What's the use of a rational mind
When you're left with a broken heart
That's all but there to show your love

Dawning over all those fears
Came to realize what's so real
On vivid dreams that we lay inside
Spread my wings I'll let you see me outside
With nothing but your arms to hold me close

Flames of passion you've burned me through
Engulfed my everything in you
Left with what that we were used to
Now all that's here is you and me
One with a smirk on his lips
And another with a headache

If all of this wasn't worth it
I'm not sure what is
And if we say that we're in love
Let's keep it to ourselves
To part my lips with you I shall revere
Yet I'll have to leave you here

And don't wait for me...


Amusement spread across his sultry lips as a feminine hand touched his. "What?" A faint voice trailed along the wind and whispered into his ears, drops of sweat dripping down to the soil followed by heavy breathing and panting. "Nothing. I just like the way you taste."

"Hey," a female voice interrupted. "Stop talking to that glass of orange juice. You're freaking me out."
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Matt
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6916 days, 5 hours, 37 minutes and 34 seconds ago.
Posted on Monday, July 05, 2004 at 19:05 (GMT -5)

OOC: Hmm.... do haikus count....? Can't rhyme or practice syllabic consistency beyond the simple 5-7-5 template.... Let's see.

Thinking thoughts tonight
The self-deception of hope
Fights self-deception

One more compromise
With each thought, the fire dims
One more hero dies

You cannot exist
Let your mind destroy itself
The ego, no more

Each page a daydream
The writer tells his story
Truth in ev'ry word
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Iridia
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YASD


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3753 days, 20 hours, 23 minutes and 42 seconds ago.
Posted on Monday, July 05, 2004 at 19:31 (GMT -5)

Wrote this in about five minutes, inspired by my own cat, who is not grey but orange.

Communi-cat-ion

A Small Grey Cat
Quirks his tail into a question
Mark, and his
Ears, like apostrophes,
Prick up at the sound
of the refrigerator door.

Smooth fur, underlined
By stylish stripes
Parenthesized around
A long lean body
Flows in italicized motion
On four quotation-mark paws

And pupils, like slanted
Black dashes, in
Hyphenated eyes
Lock onto me.

A pink-comma tongue
Curls into the milk, leaving
Small period-dots of white
On his grey-furred chin.

I watch, and decide
(after years of research
and careful thought)
It would be so very simple
To replace punctuation
with Small Grey Cats.
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Derek B Rackham Esq.
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6959 days, 21 hours, 42 minutes and 13 seconds ago.
Posted on Tuesday, July 06, 2004 at 20:09 (GMT -5)

Okay when I started writing poetry is was by pure accident, by me trying to be a smartass and it all backfiring on me. I come from Australia. In an english class in high school our teacher entered us in a national poetry competition backed by the Sydney Morning Herald, one of the most recognized news papers on our peice of rock. We had to write a Haiku themed on eternity following the cool Sydney fireworks show in 2000 (31Dec/1Jan), which featured eternity being lit up on the Harbor Bridge. Any way to cut a long story short we were given a 50 minute lesson to write an entry for this competition. I stuffed around for the entire lesson and with 5 minutes to go came up with
The brick on the wall
is eternity. The Brick
has a fly on it.
thinking that this would do. Any way weeks later this was declared by the paper to be the winning entry, people asked what inspired me, how did I do it, so I humored them and made up all kinds of beneficial stories, and have kept writing to this day. PS I still have one of the huge flags that flew in Sydney with my Haiku on it as a souvenier.
Tell me how to get stronger....

[Edited 1 time, last edit on 7/6/2004 at 20:10 (GMT -5) by Derek B Rackham Esq.]
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wakka
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6718 days, 16 hours, 24 minutes and 21 seconds ago.
Posted on Wednesday, July 07, 2004 at 09:17 (GMT -5)

Iridia: that was a very nice poem, funny.
and to Derek...
you lucky bastard ;)
something like that happens only when not really trying, that could happen in a movie.
hey, it could be made into a movie: you would become a famous writer, director and a construction worker, all by chance and in the end barney would eat the world.
yeah.
And my point was...
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Derek B Rackham Esq.
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6959 days, 21 hours, 42 minutes and 13 seconds ago.
Posted on Wednesday, July 07, 2004 at 22:21 (GMT -5)

But before Barney totally destroys the world Robert Smith would come to save the day - turn into mothman and emerge victorious from the ensuing Gamera style monster battle....
Tell me how to get stronger....
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Duke Ravage
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Gravebane Zombie


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5660 days, 23 hours, 43 minutes and 26 seconds ago.
Posted on Thursday, July 08, 2004 at 03:53 (GMT -5)

Robert Smith? That's my dad. :P

But in any case, if you could confine that stuff to the OOC thread it'd be appriciated. That's what it's there for; not trying to be a mean mod, just exercising some of my power (been a while since i had a chance, throw me a bone here) and pointing out that i made a thread specifically for such chatter...
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Iridia
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3753 days, 20 hours, 23 minutes and 42 seconds ago.
Posted on Sunday, July 11, 2004 at 09:15 (GMT -5)

Thanks. I can't do serious poetry. :) Or actually, much poetry at all. I usually stick to essays and stories.
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